@6xPlatinum true, but I’d argue that your version isn’t easier to read/more comprehensible. the other version is also closer to the actual script than your version, with capitalization memes and whatnot. for me, having each thing being said separated by a break makes the text much easier to read. the way you’ve formatted it is more like a book, whereas we want them to be more like a script as that’s what it is (not trying to say that your page doesn’t look good, just not for this type of text. i also understand the amount of time/effort put towards it and appreciate the dedication!)