Patrick J. Dimosthenis – Anomaly - 74271

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What is it about me
That my lyrics are not worthy?
Not enough metaphors
Perhaps not enough emotion?
That is preposterous
All I write is real
I probably evoked many
Not the “professionals”
Nevertheless
“No poem can ever be perfect.”
So why do I feel inferior
When I should feel superior?
It could be the syntax
With the arrangement of words
Badly arranged
In addition to passive voices
I feel like a doormat
I feel like a reject
I feel like a forgotten memory
I feel like an anomaly

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